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2014 annual ProZ.com translation contest: "Celebrations" » Italian to Spanish

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Source text in Italian

Non so in qual modo, ma i miei scolarini erano venuti a sapere che quel giorno era il mio compleanno. Me li vidi arrivare alla scuola col vestito delle feste e con un regalino tra le mani.

Chi mi portava una penna elegante, chi un libriccino da messa, chi un astuccio da lavoro, chi un bel mazzo di fiori freschi. Io fui consolata e attristata da quella vista: consolata perchè qualunque segno di gratitudine o d'affetto che mi venisse da quei buoni figliuoli mi toccava il cuore e mi faceva parer leggiero ogni sacrifizio: attristata, poichè pensavo che i denari occorsi in quelle compre, potevano venir destinati a più nobile uso. A ogni modo, accolsi serenamente quelle care dimostrazioni d'amore.

Un bambino solo, il più povero, non mi offrì nulla: ma dal suo contegno imbarazzato e dal suo visetto malinconico argomentai quanto dovesse soffrire. Lo chiamai e quando l'ebbi vicino me lo strinsi ripetutamente fra le braccia, baciandolo. Incoraggiato da quelle carezze, il poverino mi pose tra le mani un involtino e fuggì vergognoso.

Sorpresa e incuriosita, lo aprii senza che nessuno potesse accorgersene. Vi erano.... indovinate!.. Tre pallottoline di zucchero!

Lo richiamai subito da me.

--Lo sapevi che mi piacesse lo zucchero? gli chiesi sorridendo.

--Me lo sono figurato! Mi piace tanto a me!

--E tu, ripresi commossa, l'hai certo chiesto alla mamma e....

--No signora! replicò prontamente, non ho chiesto nulla a nessuno; glie l'ho serbato proprio io, di mio....

--Ma pure....

--La nonna, quando mi dà il caffè e latte, mi mette sempre nella chicchera due o tre pallottoline di zucchero per indolcirlo. Io ho levato lo zucchero....

--E il caffè e latte?... chiesi con la gola serrata.

--L'ho preso amaro!


Mario, piccolo Mario, dove sei tu? Forse il fumo delle officine avrà annerito il tuo viso d'angelo, forse a quest'ora lavorerai i campi dove biondeggia la messe e si matura, al sole, la vite, forse ti accoglieranno le navi avventurose dove il lavoro è sì duro, la speranza sì fallace....

Ma chiunque tu sii, operaio, agricoltore o uomo di mare, il tuo posto è fra i nobili cuori, per quali l'amore è sacrifizio, l'abnegazione, dovere.

Mario, piccolo Mario, se tu per un momento potessi entrare nella mia stanzetta da studio, vedresti molte carte, molti libri, molti ninnoli; e vedresti anche, custoditi in una piccola campana di vetro, tre pezzetti di zucchero, un nome, una data!

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costurero
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María José Iglesias
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vergonzoso.
Flows well
A mí me pa​rece corre​cto, vergo​nzoso sign​ifica tími​do, apocad​o.
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quienquiera
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María José Iglesias
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Mariana Perussia
estuche de costura
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Excelente ​elección. ​O también ​costurero.
María José Iglesias
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Mariana Perussia
pequeño costurer
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Mariana Perussia
esas entrañables muestras de cariño.
Flows well
Muy buena ​elección
Maria Victoria Moszoro
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tellezitos
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reconfortó
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Maria Victoria Moszoro
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barque
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Mariana Perussia
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engañosa
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Leonora Madalena
el amor es sacrificio y la abnegación es deber.
Flows well
Leonora Madalena
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pudieras asomarte a mi modesto estudio,
Flows well
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Pero seas operario, agricultor, marinero,
Flows well
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misal
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Mariana Perussia
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Pero estés donde estés:
Flows well
Me parece ​una buena ​opción de ​traducción​.
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inari1510
inari1510
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las vides maduran al sol
Flows well
Leonora Madalena
cualquier cosa que seas
Flows well
No sé si e​ncaja bien​ con el re​sto de la ​frase, per​o me parec​e mejor op​ción que l​a de otras​ traduccio​nes.
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No me digas...
Flows well
Me parece ​una traduc​ción más a​certada qu​e la de ot​ras traduc​ciones pre​sentadas. ​La maestra​ demuestra​ extrañeza​ y sorpres​a y Mario ​acaba cont​ándole tod​o.
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Pero seas lo que seas
Flows well
Me parece ​una traduc​ción corre​cta.
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modesto estudio
Flows well
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Correcta s​elección d​el tiempo ​verbal.
barque
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Pero donde quiera que estés
Flows well
Me parece ​una altern​ativa más ​correcta q​ue otras d​e las trad​ucciones p​resentadas​.
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el amor es sacrificio, la abnegación, un deber
Flows well
Leonora Madalena
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sacrificio y
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barque
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seas lo que seas
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